Comments on: Standardizing Arguments, what fun! http://77viceversa.edublogs.org/2008/11/05/standardizing-arguments-what-fun/ Fri, 02 Jan 2009 23:44:27 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 By: peterrabbit http://77viceversa.edublogs.org/2008/11/05/standardizing-arguments-what-fun/comment-page-1/#comment-37 peterrabbit Wed, 05 Nov 2008 23:55:59 +0000 http://77viceversa.edublogs.org/?p=79#comment-37 When I look at your standardizations I feel as though the second one is better. But the reason why I feel this way, I'm not quite sure of. I don't want to say "because it's longer", but it just seems to flow better than the first one. I understand that your first editorial was really short and too the point, so it makes sense that your standardization would also be short and to the point. I'm afraid I can't really help you since I'm very confused as to whether or not I'm doing my own right. I guess my comment is...pick the second one? I love you. Stephanie. When I look at your standardizations I feel as though the second one is better. But the reason why I feel this way, I’m not quite sure of. I don’t want to say “because it’s longer”, but it just seems to flow better than the first one.

I understand that your first editorial was really short and too the point, so it makes sense that your standardization would also be short and to the point. I’m afraid I can’t really help you since I’m very confused as to whether or not I’m doing my own right.

I guess my comment is…pick the second one?

I love you.
Stephanie.

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